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Sunday, April 15, 2007

Motorcycle and Bicycle
Althogh motorcycles and bicycles are all used for transportation, there are still some differences between them. First, the biggest difference is the operation. The former uses gas to work. The later use humanpower to work it. The second difference is the price. Without the first costs, bicycles are much cheaper than motorcycles. Then, appeapance is another difference between them. A motorcycle is bigger, heavier the a bicycle. This is the reason why I like motorcycls more than bicycles. The next difference is the benefit, motorcycles are more convenient and more useful. If you always need to ride l long distances or time is really important for you, a motor is better than a bicycle. If you need exercise, riding bicycle is not bad for you. At this point, if you ask me what I like more then my answer is motorcycle.

1 Comments:

  • At 9:07 PM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said…

    Good! Clear organisation and good examples!

    Althogh motorcycles and bicycles are all use for transportation, there are still some differences between them.
    -->all used...

    First, the biggest difference is the operation. The former uses gas to operate. The later use humanpower to work it.
    -->good!
    -->to work


    Second is the price.
    -->The second difference lies in the price.


    Without the first pays, bicycles are more cheaper than motorcycles.
    -->are cheaper...
    -->the firsy pays?? What is this?




    Then, appeapance is another difference between them. A motor is bigger, heavier the a bicycle.
    -->a motocycle is...

    As a matter of fact, I liked motors more than bicycles.
    -->What is the relationship of this sentence to the previos one? Why do you like it better?


    Next is the benefit, motors are more convenient and more useful.
    -->The next difference is ... motorcycles...




    If you always need to drive for far distances or time is peally to you, a motor is better than a bicycle.
    -->ride a long distance
    -->peally??


    If you need exercise, riding bicycle is not bad for you. At this point, if you ask me what I like more then I will answer you-Motors.
    -->like more, my answer is 'motorcycle'.

     

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