Goodtemper

Thursday, April 05, 2007

Tired but Multicolored
Sometimes I would think if I go back to school, what will I get? There is usually an idea in my mind - go back to school. In order to get more money, friends even a degree, I must return to school. But the stresses of working and academic assignment are so heavy that I don't know whetherI can get both well or not.
First, time is a big problem. I always need to work on daytime from eight to five. After work, I usually take twenty or thirty minutes to rest then go straight to school. When I got home, it's usually 10:30 pm. After a bath and dinner, it's usually 11:30. So I really have no time to study and to do my homework. I only can do it on my holiday. This mean I don't have enough time to hang out with my friends.
Then day and day's work and assigment made me feel tired. Not only physical but also mental. Big stress and busy life sometimes me feel sickness. The increase of tiredness and stress, as a result, give my life and body more and more challenges.
But go back to school still has some advantages. For example, it makes my life more fullness. Formerly I sometimes didn't know what to do after work. But now go to school made my free time more interesting and I can learn more experience and get more firends.
Although go back school made me feel tired, it still get more than lost for me. If you have free time, maybe you can try. Then maybe you will like it.

1 Comments:

  • At 8:29 PM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said…

    Well done! The first paragraph needs more tidying up. Other paragraphs look good!


    I would think if go back to school, what will I get?
    -->...if I go back to school, ...


    There are usually an idea in my mind - go back to school.
    -->These is...


    In order to get more money, friends even a degree.
    -->This sentence is not complete.

    But the stresses of working and academic assignment are so heavy that I don't know weather I can get both well or not. First, time is a big problem.
    -->weather-->whether

    After work, I usually take twenty or thirty minutes to rest then go to school straight.
    -->go straight to school

    to my homework-->to do...

    This mean -->This means


    Big stress and busy life sometimes let my body had sickness.
    -->make me feel sick

    The increase of tiredness and stress, as a result, give my life and body more and more tests.
    --> tests-->challenges

    But go back to school still has some advantages.
    -->Going back...


    For example, make my life more fullness.
    -->For example, it makes...



    Although go back school made me feel tired, I still get more than lost.
    -->Although going back to school..., the benefits of going to school are greater than the disadvantages(inconveniences).

     

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