October 5, 2006
Dear Min
It is thursday evening and I am in an english course. It was a bad day and I fell a little tired after all day's work. What are you doing now? I think you might be free at home.
Last Sunday, I got to Taipei 101 skyscrapers. When I walked into the tall building, I found there were so many people queueing up for the elevator which could take people to go to the observatory on the 89th floor. It only took 39 seconds. When we got on the 89th, the scenery around the building was so beautiful.
Later, we went to Dr. Sun Yat-sen The Memorial Hall. Where we can see the saga of Dr. Sun Yat-sen. After that, we went to Dan shui. Dan shui has an old street. It's usually full of people on holiday because there were some speciality like fish crisp. Taipei is so beautiful especially the
night scenery and tall building.
How are you? I hope that you are well and happy. How is your job, family? Is everything OK? By the way, if you have free time you could go to taipei to take a rest. Taipei is such an interesting place there you would have wonderful nights. Please write soon. I hope getting your letters.
Dear Min
It is thursday evening and I am in an english course. It was a bad day and I fell a little tired after all day's work. What are you doing now? I think you might be free at home.
Last Sunday, I got to Taipei 101 skyscrapers. When I walked into the tall building, I found there were so many people queueing up for the elevator which could take people to go to the observatory on the 89th floor. It only took 39 seconds. When we got on the 89th, the scenery around the building was so beautiful.
Later, we went to Dr. Sun Yat-sen The Memorial Hall. Where we can see the saga of Dr. Sun Yat-sen. After that, we went to Dan shui. Dan shui has an old street. It's usually full of people on holiday because there were some speciality like fish crisp. Taipei is so beautiful especially the
night scenery and tall building.
How are you? I hope that you are well and happy. How is your job, family? Is everything OK? By the way, if you have free time you could go to taipei to take a rest. Taipei is such an interesting place there you would have wonderful nights. Please write soon. I hope getting your letters.
Your Friend,
Alick
posted by wei @ 6:16 AM
1 Comments:
At 8:51 PM,
Yuhsiuwriting said…
Very good!
Some comments for you:
It is thursday evening and I am in an english course.
-->capital letters
Next Sunday, I got to Taipei 101 skyscrapers. When I walked into the tall building, I found there were so many people queued up for the elevator which could take people to go to the observatory on the 89th floor.
-->You use past tense, so it is 'Last Sunday'.
I found there were so many people queued up
-->there were so many people queueing
It only need 39 seconds. When we get on the 89th, the scenery around the building was so beautiful.
-->It only took 38 seconds.
-->When we got...
in holiday -->on holidays
I hope to get your letters.
--> you can write : I look forward to reading(getting) your letters.
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