When I a college student, I always spend time with my friends, going out or reading in a library . Life is so wonderful on those time . After graduation, I don't have any plan and I don't know what to do about future. After army, I got a job in a textile factory and worked there for four years. But the longer I worked there, the more confused I became.
In this company, I realize most of my coworkers were lazier , I can't see the furure of the company. So I want to have some change. After discussing with my parents, I choose to study because I think study can help me to learn a second skill. However, I know it is difficulity to study after working all day. Going to school not only need time, but also need more patience.
Now I have started my classes, I found it won't be as easy as I imagined. But I know it is my own choice and I need to insisted. Either difficuties or frustration can't defeated me . I believe furure is held by ourselves and I hope life will be better than before .
In this company, I realize most of my coworkers were lazier , I can't see the furure of the company. So I want to have some change. After discussing with my parents, I choose to study because I think study can help me to learn a second skill. However, I know it is difficulity to study after working all day. Going to school not only need time, but also need more patience.
Now I have started my classes, I found it won't be as easy as I imagined. But I know it is my own choice and I need to insisted. Either difficuties or frustration can't defeated me . I believe furure is held by ourselves and I hope life will be better than before .

1 Comments:
At 6:06 AM,
Yuhsiuwriting said…
Good!
Some suggestions:
1.reading in library-->in a library
2. After graduated, I don't have any plan and I don't know what to do about future.
-->After graduation, ...
OR
--> After I graduated, ...
3. But the more times I do , the more confuse i feel.
-->The longer I worked there, the more confused I became.
4. I think study can help me more better and I can learn the second speciality.
-->help me to learn a second skill.
5. I know it is difficulity to study after worked all day.
-->difficult to study after wokring all day.
6.It not only need time, but also need more patience.
-->Going to school again requires not only time, but also more patience and energy.
7.Now I have started my classes, I found it won't be as easy as I imagined. But I know it is my own choice and I need to insisted.
-->Well said!
8.Whether difficuties or frustration can't defeated me .
-->Either ...or...
9.I believe furure is hold by ourself and I hope life will be better than yet .
-->is held...ourselves (check spelling)
-->life will be better than before.
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