Goodtemper

Thursday, September 28, 2006

When I a college student, I always spend time with my friends, going out or reading in a library . Life is so wonderful on those time . After graduation, I don't have any plan and I don't know what to do about future. After army, I got a job in a textile factory and worked there for four years. But the longer I worked there, the more confused I became.
In this company, I realize most of my coworkers were lazier , I can't see the furure of the company. So I want to have some change. After discussing with my parents, I choose to study because I think study can help me to learn a second skill. However, I know it is difficulity to study after working all day. Going to school not only need time, but also need more patience.
Now I have started my classes, I found it won't be as easy as I imagined. But I know it is my own choice and I need to insisted. Either difficuties or frustration can't defeated me . I believe furure is held by ourselves and I hope life will be better than before .

1 Comments:

  • At 6:06 AM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said…

    Good!
    Some suggestions:

    1.reading in library-->in a library

    2. After graduated, I don't have any plan and I don't know what to do about future.
    -->After graduation, ...
    OR
    --> After I graduated, ...

    3. But the more times I do , the more confuse i feel.
    -->The longer I worked there, the more confused I became.

    4. I think study can help me more better and I can learn the second speciality.
    -->help me to learn a second skill.



    5. I know it is difficulity to study after worked all day.
    -->difficult to study after wokring all day.


    6.It not only need time, but also need more patience.

    -->Going to school again requires not only time, but also more patience and energy.


    7.Now I have started my classes, I found it won't be as easy as I imagined. But I know it is my own choice and I need to insisted.
    -->Well said!

    8.Whether difficuties or frustration can't defeated me .
    -->Either ...or...


    9.I believe furure is hold by ourself and I hope life will be better than yet .
    -->is held...ourselves (check spelling)
    -->life will be better than before.

     

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